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One Response to “Comic #2.225 “Ode to Onomatopoeia””
Just a little constructive criticism… you need to work on your art style. This is just so confusing and busy that half the time I have no clue what’s going on? Also, I feel like you’re relying on your artistry to tell the majority of your narrative, which just isn’t working. Your style is too chaotic, so at this point I think I have about a 70% complete version of the story, although I’m never sure what happened during the battles until afterwards when I see who’s still alive.
July 23rd, 2010 at 6:43 pm
Just a little constructive criticism… you need to work on your art style. This is just so confusing and busy that half the time I have no clue what’s going on? Also, I feel like you’re relying on your artistry to tell the majority of your narrative, which just isn’t working. Your style is too chaotic, so at this point I think I have about a 70% complete version of the story, although I’m never sure what happened during the battles until afterwards when I see who’s still alive.